What fantastic pictures! It's a real shame that this story didn't get finished. I read the rough draft and it had real promise at that stage. These pictures really capture the sweet feeling of the early sections which I read. I really wish that I could read how the boys got from there to those lovely kissing pictures.
I love the way that you've incorporated the text into the pictures. The colours and the light are lovely. There's a brilliant feeling of secretiveness and bond to these images.
I love the kisses. Just fantastic. The way the boys move round each other. I really enjoyed looking at your great pictures, even without the story to go with them.
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Date: 2012-06-07 10:50 am (UTC)I love the way that you've incorporated the text into the pictures. The colours and the light are lovely. There's a brilliant feeling of secretiveness and bond to these images.
I love the kisses. Just fantastic. The way the boys move round each other. I really enjoyed looking at your great pictures, even without the story to go with them.