First, for the story, I really enjoyed it down to the last bit, it even left me carving more. I've got to agree the reactions seem quite realistic, you made each character have their own mind and understand it and it shows. I loved James' spoiled brat almost grown up attitude, and him worshipping Teddy for so long is just too sweet <3 Thanks for sharing your work and if you have any other T/J let me know!
As for the art, it felt very right. I love how the not too bright colors worked with the story, it makes me a bit nostalgic for some reason. And I too loved the Teddy on the floor one, it's so sad it sets the mood really well. I really like how you portrayed Luna too <3 great job!
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Date: 2012-06-07 12:50 am (UTC)As for the art, it felt very right. I love how the not too bright colors worked with the story, it makes me a bit nostalgic for some reason. And I too loved the Teddy on the floor one, it's so sad it sets the mood really well. I really like how you portrayed Luna too <3 great job!